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Feedbacks on my CV please!!

Discussion in 'Employment & Jobs' started by Patrulheiro, Mar 18, 2008.

  1. Patrulheiro

    Patrulheiro Bit Poster

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    Hello All!!

    i post my CV here a few days ago and after some really good comments I change a few things a would like your comments here again!! Everything is welcome!!!
    Im trying to apply for an entry level job such as 1st line support just to add!!

    Many thanks in advance :biggrin
     

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  2. richardw

    richardw Nibble Poster

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    The profile should not contain 'I am', it should be written in the third person. You may also want to get an english friend to go over the grammer.
    You should try & condense the skills section, eg team management would cover a lot of different skills, but you dont need to list them all.
    You may also need to explain why you went from IT support in Brazil, to catering in the UK.
     
    Certifications: MOS (Master), MMI
    WIP: MCAS, AAT

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