CV and cover letter advice?

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ADVICE PLEASE!!!

Please find attached my cv and cover letter... I made changes and now have added and cover letter to go with it. Any advice will be really helpful.
Thanks in advance!

 

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Hi becks or is it david ? or David Beckham

'E' is a vowel, so use 'I am seeking an entry...'

 

Profile is too long and when applying for jobs in UK you are expected to be able to communicate in english so you can take it off too.

And personally I don't like the logos.

Other than that it's not too bad actually. You could do with some voluntary work to get some recent experience in IT. It would help a lot.