CV advice after and review plaese

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I have made some changes to my CV following some advice here . However , I could nt make much to reduce the cramped info in my Skills and employment history regarding my previous role .
I m attching it here in the hope of having further assistance if needed please , especially if you think that I still need to reduce the info in it . Appreciate your help as I could nt really find a suitable way to reduce the info in my career section because I did not want any employer to miss any key knowledge or skills they might be looking for .

Many thanks

NO responde , I have taken the CV off as Im not looking for advertisment