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Can you guys critique please, I'm brushing off my CV.

Any improvements welcome thanks gents.

EDIT: Going to get rid of Improvement driven and replace it with "forward thinking"

 

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I like it. Although I think it would be a bit better if it was 2 sentences instead of 1 long and complex one.

 

Keep sentences short and sharp, but sounds good

 

"An intuitive, resourceful and improvement driven IT professional focused on providing excellent IT services built around industry standards, efficient and intelligent design and resourceful and smart management, whilst committed to continuous service improvement by identifying gaps in process and skills, and ameliorating them through skilled usage of industry frameworks, methodologies and principles innit"

 

I'll be honest, my English skills are the worst of my set. Where would you put the sentence break in there?

 

I have tried to shorten each sentence.

Just an example;

An intuitive, resourceful and improvement driven IT professional focused on providing excellent IT services. This is built around industry standards, efficient and intelligent design, and resourceful and smart management. My philosophy is committed to continuous service improvements by identifying gaps in processes and skills, and ameliorating them through skilled usage of industry frameworks, methodologies and principles.

 

I bet they're better than mine.

Something like that maybe.