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Re-written my CV, comments please.

Discussion in 'Employment & Jobs' started by Big_nath, Mar 6, 2009.

  1. Big_nath

    Big_nath Kilobyte Poster

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    Hi,
    I have just re-written my CV, please could you guys take a look and give me your thoughts?

    Many thanks
     

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    Certifications: MCP, MCSA, MCSA:M, MCSE, MCTS
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  2. dmarsh

    dmarsh Terabyte Poster

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    Seems like a nice looking tidy CV to me, no major complaints.

    Maybe a few minor english tweaks here and there ?

    I'm no english major so perhaps get a second opinion. I always get someone good at english to review my CV :wink:.

    "I take great pride in my work and work well as part of a team as well as an individual."

    This does not read well to me, find a way to remove/rearrange the double occurence of 'work' and 'well' ?

    "Manage server backups and data recovery."

    Replace 'Manage' with 'Management of' ?

    You seem to have a mix of various tenses ? Again my english is not that great but I'd have thought previous job descriptions should be in past tense. So maybe replace 'Managing' with 'Managment of' etc ? However its possible the prelude of 'My responsibilites included:-' makes this fine.

    "References will be given on request."

    Maybe replace 'given' with 'provided' ?
     
    Certifications: CITP, BSc, HND, SCJP, SCJD, SCWCD, SCBCD, SCEA, N+, Sec+, Proj+, Server+, Linux+, MCTS, MCPD, MCSA, MCITP, CCDH
  3. Big_nath

    Big_nath Kilobyte Poster

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    Cool, my english skills are not the best. Thanks for your comments.
     
    Certifications: MCP, MCSA, MCSA:M, MCSE, MCTS
    WIP: A few

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