How does my CV look?

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Hey guys just wanted to run my CV by you to see if you can find any flaws in it - i put it together this morning and there might be spelling mistakes here and there so excuse them. Ok some details will change when i start job hunting - is my format ok?

thanks in advance!

 

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Personally, rather than bullet point summary at the start, i would put some of that info into a paragraph, summarising your experience and the direction you would like to take with your career, but also a couple of points about you as a person (hard working, fast learner, people skills etc,) that general sort of thing. Depending on the specific job you are applying for with that CV, i would make sure the role i am applying for fited with what i am sayin in the "direction of carreer" part.

 

I agree with Danielno8 about the bullet points and would say "Demonstrated" and not Showed.

 

yes George it's getting there.

It's late, a cursory glance and i see this..

you use good twice. that's not good

First, *good*, dont under sell yourself. You have an excellent understanding of Microsoft operating system*s* as well as a sound grasp of Linux.

You are striving to stay ahead of the pack as these technologies progress into the future.

 

Couldn't help but noticing you worked in Cyprus, are you Cypriot? I used to live in Cyprus in the 90's

 

Forgot i posted it! LOL changes have been taken on board thanks!

yea jimmy_2k im "Cypriot" but wasnt born here - moved here when I was 18...

 

go on!!!